Freestyle Writing Based On A Image

IALT:Freestyle write about an image

Hey guys so Today Mrs Komor asked us to write a story about a picture. This is I wrote. Tell me what you think in the comment section below.

MY STORY - The wind rushed through her hair as she descended the mountain at great speed. For most children this would be exhilarating, even terrifying experience, but for Lucy it was just an ordinary journey to school.

She lived on top of the mountain and her house was a small castle Lucy lived with her mum and older brother when she was 5 years old her dad died in a plane crash.

She went to a all girls school called zipline school for girls.

This school is different from mine because we do not have a zipline and we do not get to wear mutfi everyday.

Lucy felt amazing when she went down the zipline at first she was shy but her dad always said before he passed away was to always believe in yourself and you can do anything.

Debating/Writing Reflection

IALT:reflect on writing

Hey guys so today at school in the middle block we had writing on statement argument basically debating so we had to debate on 3 statements.

the first statement was should it be compulsory to learn Te Reo and my thought was yes because it is the national language in New Zealand.

The next statement was should you be driving by the age of 10 and my thought was no because they are not mature enough  and at age of 10 that is still a child so that child should learn how ride a bike before you learn how to ride to a car. 

The last statement was should there be no school rules and my thought no because of there is no rules then there will be violence and tagging on the wall also there will be no learning.

So yeah you are welcome to leave a comment and have a great night sleep.

MY WRITING GOALS FOR TERM 2

WALT:Tell about our writing goals

Hey guys so these are my writing goal for this term

Why These 2 Goals Are Important To Me: These goals are important to me because it can help me with my writing and I can achieve this goal by working on it and getting some help from my friends or teacher and it is important because it help me when I do free writing or a test.

How Can These Goals Can Help Me In The Future:

These goals can help me in the future by me remembering what my goals and achieve them in collage or wherever I go that has something to do with writing and just remember what my writing goals are when I am stuck on something. This can help me in the future by being motivated by my writing quotes and my 2 important goals for writing.  

You are welcome to leave a comment and have a great night sleep.

Writing T4W2 2017

Hi today we did explanation writing my one was about how to show manaakitanga to the community at all times on the craft template that my teacher have has share with us. I worked by myself and then the teacher called but it was not about my writing. What I found challenging was what to write about because I had no idea on what to write about until I got an idea on to write about our community that we live in I was working with my friends in one tables and we were working nice and quit until some people came but it was alright we all started to be working on writing. my next step is to fish my work because I am only on my second part of my writing so I am trying to finish as fast as I can but at the same time I do not want to rush so yeah you are welcome to leave a comment and have a great day and night.

HONESTY

WALA:Honesty
Hi this is my work that i worked on
My teacher ask to pick 1 out of 3 things Responsibility Integrity and honesty to talk and i wanted to talk about honesty
What i found hard to do was to edit my work and trying my best to do the best i can
what i found easy to do is to find images and writing

Kiwican Reflection - After school blog

Kiwisport Reflection - After School Blog

Anzac poem - T2W1 - 2017

WALT:Write poems about anzac

School Values And SEE Structure - Alo - T2W1 - 2017

School Values/SEE Structure

WALT:Write a SEE Structure and our School values

Statement:Ako means learning

Explanation:so we can care for others we do that because it helps people to make good choice and them to be caring others people too so we can live a good life.

Example:if you were stuck on a maths questions you can search it up or ask someone for help

Statement:Manaakitanga means caring for others

Explanation:that means caring for others we do that because it helps people to make good

choice and them to be caring others people too so we can live a good life.

Example:if someone was crying you can sit next to them and talk to then then you can be friend

Statement:Rangimarie/Tukumarie:That means Tolerance and peace

Explanation:so we can have no bad thing happen and to just be peaceful and to live in a good world and to show some tolerance too.

Example: if someone chuck rubbish on the ground you can pick it up and to put it on the bin or you can ask the person who chucked it on the ground and ask them to put it on the bin.

Statement:Whanaungatanga That means building relationships

Explanation:so we can make new friends that are new at the school or people that are to shy that you can meet them to make them feel safe and happy.

Example if someone being mocked you can stand up for them and you guys can be friends

TE ORO - T1W11 - 2017

Today i went to te oro with my school we had to go in 5 groups for the victors and the performances had to go at the van So we got in our groups to te oro in the bus when we arrived it looked so nice . so we got of in our group and we went for a tour around  te reo we looked at all the other different school works and they looked amazing the first room we went to was Glen lnes,pt.england,glenbrae school,panmure bridge,tamaki college and tamaki primary { My school }

Then we saw my school musical play it was fun and it looked so big and fun.then after that we went back to school i felt happy because it was so much fun seeing all the schools work and i hope i get to go there again one day but only thing was that the speaker was not working but it was fun we also saw all the different walking around to saying hi to them was cool to we also had a little room for our school and it looked nice and the water tap was nice and cold and the best part was that we got to play games but it was sad that we had to go back so fast but it was so amazing and i enjoy it and hopefully our school and the other schools like and love it to and had fun there too but they could got good speakers.

Walt:to Write a reflection about anything we have done

Why taking care of our environment is important T1W7

hi this is my work on the environment and why we look after it and why it is so important.

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Alo Riddles T2W4 2016

WALT: We are learning how to write riddles.
In Room 7 we have been writing to write Riddle. It has been lots of fun! This my Riddle. Please leave a comment behind hope you guys around the world like my work.