WALT:Write down about the pools tomorrow
Hey people so tomorrow the school and I are going to the pools for a pool picnic day I am so excited because I get to swim and have lots of fun and eat lots of food and play with my friends. But all I have to do is give my permission slip and money then I am going to have a fun time so yeah you are welcome to leave a comment and have a great day.
I like how you added - 'so excited' to the title. This gave me an idea about how you felt about going to the pools. Readers LOVE to connect with what the writer has to say.
ReplyDeleteI hope you had a good time today Alo! I REALLY enjoyed seeing all of you have fun together. I saw a LOT of people showing the school values of Whanaungatanga, Manaakittanga, Rangimarie, Tukumarie and Ako.
Great image choice!